HI everyone this is my first design. Crits and Comments are Greatly appreciated. Enjoy!

looks pretty cool, but maybe you could elaborate on the design and have it coiling up from the bottom corner.

placements in the center just dont look as artistic as offset ones.

thanks for the comment. I wouldn't want it were it is in that size either. I'll redraw it and move it, but what do you think of the style?

I think u need to dodge ur hightones a little bit



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Make it bigger ;D