I accidentally deleted the critique I already had, so consider this version 2. I've changed the clouds and added reflection to the pills. All feedback is appreciated. Thanks.

love the cloud on the left, but i don't really get the one on the right... his mouth looks weird and what's with the red dot?? the highlights look nice.

What does everyone think about the reflection on the pills?

i havnt seen the first version but i like the idea of light on the pills because it makes it seem more 3d and not so much just a flat drawing

Here is another version with a new expression on the right cloud.

OMG ROFL!!! ROFL...

i like it but i dont understand it........so i wouldn't wear it but im sure other people would

Ha ha I like it man, especially like the look of the pills :D

Here's a new version with presentation. I feel it's pretty much ready for submission. thanks for everyone's advice and support.

I would say your correct in your assumption, I think its ready to rock! Good luck mate :D



Please comment on my design if you get a chance:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/12106/Balloon_Golf

lmfao funny.

Thanks. I submitted this version, so expect to see it up for voting soon.

Very nice.
Great concpt.
Submit!