this reminds me of a shirt that was printed ... maybe u should change the foreground color so it doesnt look so much like it- i guess itd help if i new the link to the old shirt
yeah im fine tuning it right now on denim/slate again and added n some more character interaction to sepperate it from "that way" as people seem to be seeing some similarities.
thanks everyone for your comments and result help!
when you put needs work or dont submit make sure you comment on why, otherwise it doesnt do to much good when i dont know why you feel so, thanks everyone again!
thanks everyone!