ahhhh help me out everyone, my old submission was deleted o accident and i lost all the help!
thanks everyone!

GREAT $5

this reminds me of a shirt that was printed ... maybe u should change the foreground color so it doesnt look so much like it- i guess itd help if i new the link to the old shirt

otherwise very cute

i saw denim version of this somewhere?! i like the denim version!!

i don't think this design must be reworked...i think you should submit this right now, because it's very good ;-)

yeah im fine tuning it right now on denim/slate again and added n some more character interaction to sepperate it from "that way" as people seem to be seeing some similarities.

it shall be up soon!

Reminds me of "This Way" with how you've done the trees, not that it's necessarily a bad thing. Pretty neat.

thought id try it again on denim/slate to push it out of the "this way" mentality
ive also added some bats follow or chasing him to give it a little more.
still not sure if i like that bats, but the original color is still my favorite!

what do you all think?

the original is much better balanced in colors ;-) and i think that the bats are useless here, it distracts from the scene, in my opinion

I like the 2nd one better.

there both good, offer the design on 2 different shirts lol

Jwalsh was reminded of this gringz design by the first version.

yah it works with a number of shirt colors, what are your thoughts on the bats? leave them remove them?

i like the bats

i think it looks better w.o the bats. this deifnitly looks less like that other shirt now that you changed the colors. good luck its lookin awesome!

i think this will be my final version and submission into the running, what are your thoughts?
other color options can be found here

why don't submit mysterious person? haha

thanks everyone for your comments and result help!

when you put needs work or dont submit make sure you comment on why, otherwise it doesnt do to much good when i dont know why you feel so, thanks everyone again!

I think when you submit it, you should offer both colors. Or maybe silver.

i don't know, it just looks like That Way tee...

i guess i understand with it having some what similar tree's, but the designs are both very different

dude just send it in, who cares. honestly i like this better than the bear thing anyway. and it is different so just send it in

i'd wear ti fo sure

what program are you using?

i think it's ready to go. submit it, baby!

looks good -- a bit like the shirt threadless already printed though.
Check out Gringz

thanks everyone! yah im going to submit it in, maybe put it on some other colors too in the submission!

im using photoshop Kingforaday!

how do you get everything so clean cut??

just really good with the brush tool lol

oh no i dont use the brush tool at all! the pen tool is the magician to use. think of connect the dots but you make your own points

ohh ok, yo can you do me a favor and check out my design in the critiques? " a new idea " is the title and its like the 3rd one down

thanks man! i want this shirt lol

oh yah for sure man, ill give it a look.

anyone else?
getting down to the submission wire!

how about a boy in silhouette or something running away?

hey everyone, thanks again for all the comments and suggestions!
this will be the final version into the running! thanks

Good luck. I think you did a good job.

isnt it any good on a brown tee? (environment,mud,nature)...

no it does i had put it in and then removed it due to file size.
and yes it does look good on brown!

it looks good on any dark colors of tee, anyhow for me :) ..... Submit it!!!