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v8 Sour Power!, current version








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Version 6 - 1597 days ago
Version 7 - 1582 days ago
Version 8 - 1580 days ago

Mourir
Mourir on Jan 27 '08
final design! (i hope..) this is the one im planning to submit unless anyone has any objections. mmm tasty new orange tee...



and yes the lemon is different from the other two, thanks for noticing.
Ryder Revolution
   Ryder Revolution on Jan 27 '08
cool, one question though....why is the juice dripping upwards?
Mourir
Mourir on Jan 27 '08
its unusual, interesting and draws attention. when i had the lemon up like this i got 14 submit this so people seem to like it.
Ryder Revolution
   Ryder Revolution on Jan 27 '08
that's a good enough reason for me.
bang for your buck
bang for your buck on Jan 27 '08
now that im here, i have to say orange is my fave. bright, but not as bright as the lemon. i love how we have all the choices bro! totally buying when this prints and ill wear with my black skinnys so i can think of hot days on the cold ones
Robot_Lovee
Robot_Lovee on Jan 27 '08
Thats awesome. good job!
Farmer Bill
Farmer Bill on Jan 27 '08
mmmm my mouth is watering! tee-riffic
quister
   quister on Jan 27 '08
This is so cooling me off on a day at the beach. Submit!!!!
GeorgeMcStrawberry
GeorgeMcStrawberry on Jan 27 '08
this is cool! i like how it has different fruits for different colors!
Mourir
Mourir on Jan 27 '08
thanks everyone but im not going to sub until the one that i accidentally did sub is accepted so i know it is printable. if it is declined then i can redesign here. in other words i cant be bothered
lajlaj
lajlaj on Jan 27 '08
if you accidentally subbed, you can email threadless and they won't put it into scoring. i had to do that once...



the drippy juice seems a little off to me.
Mourir
Mourir on Jan 27 '08
can you? okay i might just do that...

really? please explain why you think that so i can make it better
Mourir
Mourir on Jan 28 '08
okay is this ready to sub yet? i will if i dont get any more suggestions to fix things.
quister
   quister on Jan 28 '08
OK, I'm looking at it again and I've got one other suggestion that I should have caught before, (lajlai might have thought this too). The fruit, pulp and seeds are drawn crisply and the juice is fuzzy. Redraw the juice in the same fashion and then I think you're absolutely, positively ready to go. You've got 12 submits on this V and only 7 visitors making a comment (and you know I couldn't have scored more than once), so just do it.
HannahBanana3450
HannahBanana3450 on Jan 28 '08
I agree with quister. Otherwise, great design...love all the colors too :)
quister
   quister on Jan 28 '08
Oh! When you submit this, write a comment like; The juice of the fruit slices are defying gravity because they are being dropped from a considerable height into an ice cold pitcher of San Gria, Cosmos, Long Island Ice Tea, etc.. Cheers!



That should negate the inevitable "why are the drops going up?" question. :D :D :D
Mourir
Mourir on Jan 29 '08
will do! i'll clear up the drops tomorrow, i'm worn out even though its only 7:02 pm here. i had a huge day skateboarding, falling over and nearly breaking my leg, being laughed at by the all the guys and walking behind my friend to cover the hole in her pants. Sucks to be the only girls at a skatepark!





Mourir
Mourir on Jan 30 '08
well they accepted the lime despite my plea to not let it go into the running and save my embarrassment... but it is printable! yay! new drops coming soon...
5 days later
Miglehu
Miglehu on Feb 04 '08
I really like the lime...
Lock42
Lock42 on Feb 04 '08
Yeah, I like the lime, I couldn't wear a yellow tshirt.
gootyam
gootyam on Feb 05 '08
I would wear all three at once. Ok maybe not.
bang for your buck
bang for your buck on Feb 06 '08
hot as a pot of marmalade
tix
tix on Feb 06 '08
I looked through all the version and all I can say is wow. You've come a long way with this design and it turned out absolutley fantastic, kudos. You've got my vote and (if all goes well) my buy as well:)



Please critique my design! It would be much appreciated:)
orama
orama on Feb 06 '08
Good work! Submit this!, i really like the colors. =)



Can you critique mi work?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/14756/Grandma_House
bang for your buck
bang for your buck on Feb 07 '08
did you get my comment? marmalade? citrus jam? bah nobody has any humor.
PigBoatCaptain
PigBoatCaptain on Feb 07 '08
I call dibs on the orange one! Sweet design!
2 days later
Mourir
Mourir on Feb 10 '08
thanks everyone. ill sub it after i get a chance to fix the drops
quister
   quister on Feb 10 '08
This presentation is the best you've done and you've got 25 submits, so stick with it. And don't forget to add a bit about dropping into a cold pitcher of something to avoid the dreaded whine, "why are the drops going up?" Good luck.
17 days later
Eyesocketaccommodation
Eyesocketaccommodation on Feb 28 '08
Man, I used to have a yellow shirt similar to this when I was a kid and I've missed it so! Can't wait to get this one!
20 days later
Mourir
Mourir on Mar 20 '08
wow, i've been ages! sorry but i have finally sub'd it. took long enough too! well its pending approval but when its up ill let you guys know. thats for all the support (over 90 days of it..) i really appreciate it. especially quister. cheers!
bang for your buck
bang for your buck on Mar 20 '08
yuss finaly i can vote 5$ and i hope everyone else does too. this is definately for the fucking print
Farmer Bill
Farmer Bill on Mar 21 '08
woot
alecbersch
alecbersch on Mar 21 '08
i like this. its offbeat, and the off center placement gives it a quirky character.
delicious cake
delicious cake on Mar 22 '08
I would definitely buy this, very cool.
token_egyptian
token_egyptian on Mar 22 '08
I think it wold be awesome if there were more drips...if I've learnt anything from art school, it's that drips always a crowd-pleaser ^_^



And if you get a chance, please crit my design!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/16557/EELectric
114 days later
hotwheels
hotwheels on Jul 15 '08
This is sweet, I would buy the lime one fosho =]

Check out my design

http://www.threadless.com/critique/24923/Positive_Thinker
Phinx
Phinx on Jul 15 '08
I want the lime on. I'm willing to pre-order lol , but seriously I say submit. I would buy this shirt it looks so innovative, and catches my eye also it's something I've never seen on a shirt before.
Phinx
Phinx on Jul 15 '08
Crit mine plz.
Farmer Bill
Farmer Bill on Jul 16 '08
tis a shame that this didn't get a good score when sub'd. tis a shame.
573 days later
diekave
diekave on Feb 10 '10
sweet..



crit mine too :D

http://www.threadless.com/critique/61801/Sweet_Killer
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