i say the dark blue is really awesome love the design

i like it a lot! i think you should rotate the design though, because it looks kinda akward with the two dots horizontal. especially on the girl, if you catch my drift haha. anyway, nice idea and very well done. my only other suggestion would be to try the moon as a crescent so it's more recognizable? i like it though.

i like it but i think smaller would be better

this is really only Version 2.

6 colors



moon and stars in Glow ink?



let me know what you think....

BTW this is still V2.

I would like to see the shirt color and the yin yang shape work together more. possibly change the cloud colors to be the same as the shirt color or the sun and the moon the same as the shirt color. because right now, this looks kind of like a sticker just stuck on the shirt, I think it needs to blend in with the shirt somehow.



its a real nice design but the defining circle shape doesnt work for me. even though I know thats what yin yangs do, I think you should step out of those constraints a bit.

I like how the clouds make the circle look shiny.



Good idea and execution, sub it.

Thank you, I went through several variations on this theme before I settled on this.

At one point there were woods and a cabin and...well, just too darn much going on.

The clouds did turn out rather nicely.

Glwo ink for the moon and stars? yes? no?

opinions?

OK, now I have changed the moon....just something that has been bothering me.

Any comments are appreciated...



what do you think of the moon and stars in glow, and the sun in silkscreen (can they do both on one shirt? the glow is more important to me...)

i dont really care too much for glow in the dark designs. The moon itself seems kind of "choppy" on the inside. It could be better if u made that a little more rounded on the inside, but i like that you turned it into a crescent instead of a full, its much better that way.

check out mine if you can



http://www.threadless.com/critique/11760/A_Little_Boy_s_Dream

i like your colours & think it suits the light blue shirt best.



i think the sun rays could be thicker. Here's some ideas:

http://megart04.deviantart.com/art/The-Sun-Burst-36227719

http://flexaction.deviantart.com/art/say-hello-to-the-sun-54360470



=D

Thanks mish_shell !!!

I LOVE my new sun rays!!!

I knew something was up...and now with the new moon and the new sun rays I'm smilin'!

Okay everyone, let me know what you think!

looks like you left an underlying stroke under at least two of the rays on the left..



and I would work on the curve a bit of both the seperation between the yin and yang and the moon.. Mostly the moon, it looks choppy compared to the rest of the curves in the design

thanks for the tip on the sunrays!

and I do need to work on the moon...I thought it kind of looked good with the slightly choppy look to it, more cartoony you know? but it does stand out comparitavely...sigh...

yeah i do think the moon looks a little to rough on the edges. smoothen it out and it'll look great. :)

i'd say rotate the sun a little so theres not a straight line running across the tee. someone helped me out with that on my design but yours might work because its way smaller than mine



http://www.threadless.com/critique/11515/sour_power

otherwise great tee!

Thank you! Ironically that straight line ended up straight because I rotated it from the original to get the two 'eyes' from being straight across...tee hee....I will fix that tonight, right now I am off to work and I hope to find all kinds of great feedback when I get home! Right Threadless community?

thanks everyone!

version one was fine

dont listen to these people!

really?

I 've quited liked the changes so far...

the crescent moon especially makes me happy.



I will work on that moon line soon!!!

crescent moon is the worse change for me. I think go with the original but give it a more contemporary colour scheme. there is a really good design here somewhere

curves on yin and yang are not smooth.

its too large on the t-shirt, its a little overwhelming.