It\'s a tribute to the classic Sierra adveture games like King\'s Quest, Police Quest and Space Quest that I loved so much.



Thoughts appreciated!

zomg Kings Quest

The puking cop is the best part.

Could you crit my design if you get a chance?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/11160/The_Progression_of_Music_Through_Hair

fucking hilarious. I'd love for there to be a pixelled chalk line rougly where he 'exploded'. But that's me

haha. It did cross my mind, but it doesn't really work with exploded pixels...

dats crazee!



lolpixelbarf

it needs something more to make it look like a murder/suicide

without the title, it could just be a mess of something..

like broken glass

haha kings quest, that was the best... 5$ because this rocks pretty hard

Add a skyscraper.

yeah i think staffell is right though, you could actually go all out and put a gathering crowd on a busy street or imply a shop front, without the title this could be any sort of terrible accident, esp. with the puking cop, thats something you don't typically see associated with suicides, terrible murders yes



maybe a sort of soft looking obviously pixelated blast burn on the ground to show there was an explosion

Is that a serious suggestion, Tont? :P I'm trying to wade through the suggestions here...

oh nevermind he was a jumper... my bad, im slow

Yeah - I originally had a blood splatter, but even in pixels is was too graphic for Threadless. The pixel person is meant to have shattered on inpact, rather than exploding.



How about just a single open window higher on the shirt that someone is pointing to?

Maybe make the body bloodier

I did that and it was too bloody. can post a version to show this if you like. I know blood isn;t that popular on Threadless.

i think implying the jump point rather than showing it adds to the design, find other ways to show he was a jumper

BLOOD!

Yeah, its serious enough. Just try it out, I reckon, see if you can make it work.. If not, what's the cop pointing at?

1) No blood. Besides, the whole gag is that he's make of pixels and he shattered.

2) I agree, without the title, it might be a little harder to get.

I scrapped the blonde cop and chucked in Dick Van Dyke to find out exactly what the fuck went on.

lol @ pixelated vomit!

The two coppers with the yellow tape look like they're skipping.

which one is skipping?

there's clearly a reel of tape in the black dude's hands! Shall I make the reel bigger?

Both, after singing "Cinderella, dressed in yellow, went upstairs to kiss a fella, how many kisses did he get?" they'll jump in together and start counting.

No, I'm just being a dork.

1 kiss! 2 kiss! 3 kiss! etc etc?

haha very good

if the tape was one pixel wider it would be clearer, i think

No, just 1, 2, 3, etc.



I think actually what's going on here is that the dead guy was skipping with them, and he tripped over the rope and splatted to the floor (pixel people are fragile). The bald guy isn't pointing upwards, he's holding a finger up to demonstrate his score.

Hey, i think i remember playing that game! :p



P.S.

This is awesome! SUBMIT

If the tape gets any thicker, it looks like a log. I've made the reel bigger in the black dudes hands. You'll see!

lol so great!

haha! i wouldn't have guessed this was you fatheed!!!

It says version 5, but this is version 3. The crit wne a bit funny. I added some more 'debris' and tied up a few odds and ends. I think I'm going to submit this now.

It's funny but at this point: Leave it ALONE!!

:) i will. thanks

Thanks for your help everyone.



It is now subbed HERE!