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KAT...
KAT... on Dec 10 '07
I just thought of shapes and came up with this I hope you all like (it\'s my first design entry)
kayne
kayne on Dec 10 '07
It's sweet, although I think the dashed lines could be a bit lighter to stand out more. Also, are the dotted lines meant to be embroidered? That would be cool.

Just a personal thing, also, I don't think you need 'placement here' on the design, people get it.
KAT...
KAT... on Dec 10 '07
thanks I guess I could make the lines a bit brighter and I will see about the dotted lines being sewn on.
FreedomYells
FreedomYells on Dec 10 '07
Very simple. but cool



I like the colors and i think the embroidery would be very cool!



Great job!



Could you help me out with my critique please?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/10978/Holy/



Thank you
nuzzborbert
nuzzborbert on Dec 10 '07
i think that the shapes should ave more variation in color... otherwise i like it
jpeacockdesign
jpeacockdesign on Dec 11 '07
i agree with the comments that have already been made. i love this and i can't wait to see your revision.
KAT...
KAT... on Dec 11 '07
dropsofrain
dropsofrain on Dec 11 '07
using embroidery would be supa cool.
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