OMG - the fly on the wall has a recording device! YIKES!



I thought it was a funny concept but I feel it still needs development...



I was trying to have the fly blend a tad bit, the idea is that you (or the gossiper) don\'t know about the secret Fly Spy is on the shirt. It\'s undercover and recording you!



It\'s not popping though so maybe adding a green foil to the wings?

Yeah it's a pretty good idea. I really don't have any way to make it better though

I'm thinking I might change the words to say "Are we alone?" Or maybe leave out words all together... ? I'll be updating this soon - I've refreshed the drawing. I'm also going to add some color - for Foil.

nice artwork, yeah i think it doesnt need the words, and put it on sme lighter tees, i cant see it on these

this is an awesome idea and i love your art! i think it would look better if the tape recorder looked a little more like part of the fly cause it looks kinda weird like some of the tape recorder is below the fly and some of it is the fly.

Hey Guys, I've made some changes - thanks for the suggestions.

- New color tee's

- no words

- I've made the fly look more tape-recorder ish



I also made it bigger, what do you think of the placement?

nice going, i kinda liked it better facing up

i like it too, maybe put the antenna near the head, can you critique my picture

If I put the antenna on his head he looks like a bee? Maybe off a wing?

Okay, new placement (facing up) and I switched the antenna to the wing. Sub 2 or 3 ... or another?

mm, maybe im being a pin in the ass, but i think that angle placed in the bottom left corner would work, dont know, wont hurt trying, and i kinda liked better the antenna the way it was before, but that might just be me, works fine either way

I like the antenna the other way as well. I'll switch it. Will also try another placement. Thanks for following up.

I made it bigger... ha ha ha! Seems to be the thing :)

Actually, it looked nice when I was scaling it so I left it.

SWEET idea, too bad it can't be the size of an actual fly 'cause that would be more fitting but no one would see it! Still, I think it is a little too big.

I liked it better smaller, actually...sorry! But it is a pretty spiffy design. Maybe bring back some of the words...?

i agree i think conceptually it would work better smaller too

Okay - I put the smaller size back. I also made a color change - more incognito style!

looks better already, but honestly I would even say even smaller still and maybe off center. . .

i agree, its supposed to be sneaky

love this fly, i think te only issue left is placement, maybe try moving it a bit to the left (and maybe lower placement?)

I know, I know... ; ) I keep trying that and it just doesn't resolve with me. I think because i'm a girl and really don't like when graphics hit me below the boob. ; ) ha!

Anyway, I'm thinking of adding another element of some kind to balance it out a bit. I might have to sleep on it.

THANKS!

well, if you don't want to put it below boob level, at least center it, but otherwise i think its a cool design.

awesome. i love the fly!

i love the colors on the green shirt! i think it should be smaller and maybe near the shoulder?

i love the illustration 5$

I really like version two of this... I think it looks cooler with the bug on the shoulder.



Also I liked the darker color of the bug on the green shirt in that version. For what it is worth though, I do see a lot of designs on here more like your last version... where the design doesn't stand out from the shirt as much (color-wise), so it may just be my personal taste.

nice work babe.

THe fly looked so lonely, so I've added the recorded gossip. What do you think? I also made the flyer much smaller as suggested.

DUDE cool idea, you should totally put some stuff in there like "You got the goods if you know what I mean?" and "I gots da Monies" and stuff

I like where you're going with that!

or ... WTF, OMG etc.

Great Idea, Damn flies. I like this version with the best, Green or dark gray. Go for the glory, submit it!

Any other suggestions for the bubbles? I like the short and sweet stuff...

last night.... or something like that.

i dunno - the voice bubbles aren't driving home the idea of the Fly Spy. I'm back to the drawing board. ummmm...

maybe a bit bigger?

New and improved critique here