This is the first design from Freedom Yells Media.

Any feedback, positive or negative is appreciated.

Thank you,


FYM

looks off center. i like the idea

Now that i look at it, it might be. We'll fix that.

Thank you!

This is one of the funniest shirts I've seen in a while! Made me laugh out loud!

Do you think we should add more things to make it more apparent the angel is in the bathroom?

i love it man!

Man this Shirt SUCKS! its terrible i would buyyy it just to burn it! LOL JK JONN LOL love it man! good design!

Maybe a roll of toilet paper to the right of the angel. Otherwise nice, haha

mmmm bet they have the softest paper... like a feather on your nether.

Yeah I was thinking a roll of toilet paper would be a nice addition. Oh and its the softest paper around.

Second Version.

Added a sink and a roll of toilet paper.

Also made some changes to the angel and made her bigger so you can see more detail.

Any and all feedback is appreciated. Even negative feedback.

Thank you in advance,

FYM

Personally I am not a fan of poo jokes or angels, so, prob not my thing as a subject. However, I think you've done this well, works on a black shirt.
Maybe the lines need more attention? At the moment the shading looks very digital and the lines, hand drawn. To me, they don't seem to go together too well. Perhaps cleaner lines?
Also, um... is there a butt flap in the robe? Maybe it needs to be down or something?

Thanks for the feedback. I will definitely put some more detail in the lines on the floor and have the robe down around the ankles.

thank you again,

Fixed the floor, shoes, and sink,

Again, any feedback positive or negative is appreciated.

Thank you in advance,

FYM

Mm, sorry but I think I preferred the floor as it was, also, maybe some shading still needs to be in the sink? Even one half of the newspaper could be a bit darker, make it look less flat?
I much prefer the shoes now, good one.

there's nothing really wrong with the design, i'm just not a big fan of the concept.

So think the floor should just be lines and no fill??

I think the shading idea is a good one. I'm done for tonight though. I'll work on it some more later this week.

Thank you very much for all your helpful input.

FYM

I don't like this one Jon! i like the first one u did alot better then this one....

Why do you like version 1 better?

Why do you like version 1 better?

whoops posted it twice

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the sink is better here... but the floor was better in the beginning. It looks like she's sitting on the ground for some reason. Maybe show more of her head? dunno.

Would you mind helping me out with my critique? http://www.threadless.com/critique/11081/Good_Vibes That would be great. :-)

actually... i do like version one the best.

i like v2 best

What if I made the sink smaller. Took out the fill in the floor and put the pants around the ankles. I think that would be better and then I could put a little of the toilet in there so you could really tell whats going on.

Thank you so much for all the feedback.

I wish the people that click don't submit would tell me why they don't like the design.

Actually I think just having the toilet paper and the trashcan there gets the idea across. The sink kinda unbalances the picture, but that's just my opinion :) Maybe you could refine the line work too?

hmmmmmmm. I like the concept. Maybe if the angel were sitting in stall and that stall was on a cloud in the sky with like a stall on either side (something to make the fact that they're sitting on a toilet more apparent). oooh. and maybe if you could incorporate some words made out of clouds that say "holy S$%*&" or something. maybe some toilet paper stuck to the angel's foot too.

and hanging underneath that cloud in the sky was the noticable plumbing for a bathroom.

haha, funny!
i think, how about a side view of the angel sitting on the toilet bowl instead of the frontal view? :P
it'd make the message more obvious.

i think, how about a side view of the angel sitting on the toilet bowl instead of the frontal view? :P
it'd make the message more obvious.

this is cool but I like the first version better

DaveSmith: I really like the cloud idea. that would be really good. and the plumbing and words in the cloud are good ideas too. you are just full of good input

Thank you