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locowoman on Dec 07 '07
All constructive critisizm is welcome. This is my first design. :)
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SoccerRay on Dec 08 '07
its cool and all... but i dont feel compelled by it
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locowoman on Dec 08 '07
Does it need more detail? I'll work on the car a bit more...
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locowoman on Dec 08 '07
Changed colour scheme to be more vivid.
Added details: windshield wipers, license plate, on bumper, wheels, and door handle. Also edited The Scream a bit. Basically cleaned up a lot of the sloppiness from before. Hope you like :] |
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Dorian Mode on Dec 08 '07
I love the idea. I'm wondering if you could incorporate more of the colors from the original painting, though.
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locowoman on Dec 08 '07
Actually that's a great idea! Thanks!
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againstbound on Dec 08 '07
i like the concept, though i think the illustration needs some work
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locowoman on Dec 08 '07
Any specific advice?
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have the car driving off a wooden pier.
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BackofYourHead on Dec 08 '07
hahahaha.
Yeah, you might want to have them in a little more danger. Also, just refine the drawing a little, shading and lines and all, do it as best as you can, then I think it's a great idea :) |
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SoccerRay on Dec 08 '07
the front right wheel+tire dont line up right. the wheel is in line with the car but the tire is more facing me. idk how to describe it but it doesnt look right
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againstbound on Dec 08 '07
i rhink more dteail on the car/characters, as well as shading, and i like the colors in v1 better, though its maybe just me
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bigGlittleGwhatbegins withG on Dec 08 '07
wow its way cool, especially the scream dude. very cool idea and design dude.
i have some suggestions though-- 1)i think that this would look amazing on black, 2) the right side of the car (the doors and such) are off, and messy 3) i would make the scream dude a little paler or make the inside of the car darker to make the scream dude pop more 4) if you decide to make the shirt black (which i think alot of people would prefer anyways and would look great with the white lines) you should make the car a bright color, not orange though if you still plan on using the orange on the robot. 5) also there are no doors on the car!! haha they are trapped. 6) i would add some lines to the back of the car near the back windshield, it is sort of confused. 7) this might distract but it might be cool to have one of those cheesy dice or hula girl things hanging from the mirror or on the dash. this might look terrible, but its just a suggesting. wow that was really long, but i hope this helps =] |
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locowoman on Dec 08 '07
Thanks guys (especially bigGlittleGwhatbeginswithG, lol)! I'll try and have an updated version up very soon.
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angeldye on Dec 09 '07
MORE DANGER!!! FALLING BRICKS,! BOMBS, WHALES!, TORNADOES!
ok, mebe none of those things!!!! but give it a more OH SHIT! factor!! love the idea!!! |
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Leng on Dec 09 '07
nice creation.
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locowoman on Dec 09 '07
Fixed the wheel, smoothed car frame a bit, changed colours.
Added door, edited car frame and door handle. Added ground, railing. |
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locowoman on Dec 09 '07
I wasn't able to incorporate much of the painting in the design because of the colour limit...
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locowoman on Dec 09 '07
Also edited the windows.
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locowoman on Dec 09 '07
bump
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Frank Vice on Dec 09 '07
theres already a print based on the scream guy, i dont think they would print another, but that may not be true
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Nerdymikey on Dec 09 '07
very nice
would like some more detail though |
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locowoman on Dec 09 '07
Could you link me somehow? I did not know that.
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Frank Vice on Dec 09 '07
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frozenman on Dec 09 '07
neat idea but it's missing a good punch. Maybe a danger looming ahead?
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locowoman on Dec 09 '07
Hmm... well there's only one way to find out if they would print this. Thanks for telling me.
I think maybe a few more edits, see how people like it, and I'll submit. |
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KCRoss on Dec 09 '07
I like it. I think the scream guy might be a little much. You might be fine with just the crash test dummy- but I could be wrong. It's pretty cool. :]
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FullOfOz on Dec 10 '07
theres already a print with the same screaming guy...so maybe not worth subbing this one...
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Dorian Mode on Dec 10 '07
Just because they've printed a parody of The Scream before doesn't mean they won't do it again. It's not like the concepts are very similar, beyond the reference to the painting.
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rowanleckie on Dec 11 '07
haha, like the idea here.
I took your advice on my trick or treat see what you think when you have a min |
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Tombie on Dec 11 '07
Very nice drawing and colours - perhaps make the car look a bit more animated though, perhaps smashing some cones out of the way and lifting off the ground slightly.
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locowoman on Dec 11 '07
Tombie - Wow, I never thought of it as a driving test, but more of a test drive from a car dealership or something. I think I kind of like your concept better... hmm..
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MatthewMelchionne on Dec 11 '07
This is great! I love the allusion to the scream!
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kalien on Dec 11 '07
I love this! I don't think it matters if there are a lot of designs with the scream guy in them
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Tombie on Dec 12 '07
I wasn't thinking of it being a test specifically, just cones on a road for roadworks, or something. Either way, it'd give an impression that the car's out of control and heading somewhere it's not meant to.
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Physh on Dec 12 '07
he's like, o noez
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silent1643 on Dec 12 '07
i like alot - hope it gets printed... and i hate to say it but the natural color fits best even tho i think there is alot of natural colors already on threadless.. cheers
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locowoman on Dec 12 '07
Yeah, I was thinking more of sticking to my original idea, it requires more imagination, which is good, so it can be interpreted many ways.
Thanks for your comments everyone! I'll see what I can do. |
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locowoman on Dec 17 '07
I think I'm going to turn this in for scoring.. I can't think of any ways to improve this...
Are there any last comments? |
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quister on Dec 18 '07
The scream face has been used before but that doesn't make it off limits. Your useage is totally different than the one on threadless. I seriously doubt that they'll reject it. All in all though do you really need the scream face? The funny part is that the crash test dummy is driving the car. You could put any anxious passenger in the car and not loose a thing. I hate the bridge and road, they're distracting. Add a couple of road cones flying in the air (Tombie's suggestion) and I think you've got a winner.
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Omadahl on Dec 19 '07
haha, i really like this
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It's a decent idea. I think the car could use a few highlights on it and some shadow below it to make it satnd out a bit.
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jimmiiko on Dec 20 '07
this is funny, but the illustration needs to be better rendered
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locowoman on Dec 20 '07
I took some suggestions on making the illustration more interesting and detailed... here it is!
I was also thinking having a traffic light (on yellow) on the back of the shirt. Your suggestions/comments? |
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locowoman on Dec 21 '07
BUMP
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Dekulink on Dec 21 '07
Very cool! I'd buy it. but make the traffic light at the bottom right on the back. 8D
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locowoman on Dec 22 '07
bump
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Baja318 on Dec 22 '07
Munch would be so proud.
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locowoman on Dec 22 '07
What is that supposed to mean?
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locowoman on Dec 23 '07
bump
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filcore on Dec 23 '07
Fun design, but please no more Munch or The Scream!!
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Jalindal on Dec 23 '07
Very cool. I like the detail, and the idea of a traffic light on the back.
(I'm looking for some help/critique on one of my subs too... http://www.threadless.com/critique/11894/Dangers_in_the_Field I'd appreciate your opinion. :) If you have the time.) |
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locowoman on Dec 23 '07
munch?
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grracexx on Dec 23 '07
I laughed as much as I saw this. I love that SO SO SO much. I think it's fine, submit it!
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jimmiiko on Dec 23 '07
i want to see more line quality, like thicks and thins
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tmccoooooool on Dec 23 '07
it seems like you don't know who Munch is. maybe wikipedia could enlighten you: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Edvard_Munch
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locowoman on Dec 23 '07
OOHH okay. I thought everyone was talking about Robert Munch. :/
when I made this design I didn't do much research on it. Munch would be so proud. I'm actually laughing out loud right now. |
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locowoman on Dec 23 '07
this will probably be my last edit before I submit.
any comments? |
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angeldye on Dec 25 '07
YESH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WINNER!!!!!!!!
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locowoman on Dec 27 '07
bump
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locowoman on Dec 28 '07
are there any last comments before I submit this?
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jalinfein on Mar 10 '08
5$
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squidspawn on Mar 10 '08
id say go for it.
maybe make the cat a different color and its shadow is a bit weird but great none the less. critique mine? www.threadless.com/critique/15137/Mikey_and_the_Monster |
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chul on Mar 10 '08
cats shadow is a bit oddly shaped, but good concept
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ejamck on Mar 10 '08
I'd buy it!!!
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LosZed on Mar 10 '08
i like the red one
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