All constructive critisizm is welcome. This is my first design. :)

its cool and all... but i dont feel compelled by it

Does it need more detail? I'll work on the car a bit more...

Changed colour scheme to be more vivid.
Added details: windshield wipers, license plate, on bumper, wheels, and door handle.
Also edited The Scream a bit.

Basically cleaned up a lot of the sloppiness from before.
Hope you like :]

I love the idea. I'm wondering if you could incorporate more of the colors from the original painting, though.

Actually that's a great idea! Thanks!

i like the concept, though i think the illustration needs some work

Any specific advice?

have the car driving off a wooden pier.

hahahaha.

Yeah, you might want to have them in a little more danger. Also, just refine the drawing a little, shading and lines and all, do it as best as you can, then I think it's a great idea :)

the front right wheel+tire dont line up right. the wheel is in line with the car but the tire is more facing me. idk how to describe it but it doesnt look right

i rhink more dteail on the car/characters, as well as shading, and i like the colors in v1 better, though its maybe just me

wow its way cool, especially the scream dude. very cool idea and design dude.

i have some suggestions though--

1)i think that this would look amazing on black,

2) the right side of the car (the doors and such) are off, and messy

3) i would make the scream dude a little paler or make the inside of the car darker to make the scream dude pop more


4) if you decide to make the shirt black (which i think alot of people would prefer anyways and would look great with the white lines) you should make the car a bright color, not orange though if you still plan on using the orange on the robot.


5) also there are no doors on the car!! haha they are trapped.


6) i would add some lines to the back of the car near the back windshield, it is sort of confused.

7) this might distract but it might be cool to have one of those cheesy dice or hula girl things hanging from the mirror or on the dash. this might look terrible, but its just a suggesting.



wow that was really long, but i hope this helps =]

Thanks guys (especially bigGlittleGwhatbeginswithG, lol)! I'll try and have an updated version up very soon.

MORE DANGER!!! FALLING BRICKS,! BOMBS, WHALES!, TORNADOES!

ok, mebe none of those things!!!! but give it a more OH SHIT! factor!!

love the idea!!!

nice creation.

Fixed the wheel, smoothed car frame a bit, changed colours.
Added door, edited car frame and door handle.
Added ground, railing.

I wasn't able to incorporate much of the painting in the design because of the colour limit...

Also edited the windows.

bump

theres already a print based on the scream guy, i dont think they would print another, but that may not be true

very nice
would like some more detail though

Could you link me somehow? I did not know that.

neat idea but it's missing a good punch. Maybe a danger looming ahead?

Hmm... well there's only one way to find out if they would print this. Thanks for telling me.
I think maybe a few more edits, see how people like it, and I'll submit.

I like it. I think the scream guy might be a little much. You might be fine with just the crash test dummy- but I could be wrong. It's pretty cool. :]

theres already a print with the same screaming guy...so maybe not worth subbing this one...

Just because they've printed a parody of The Scream before doesn't mean they won't do it again. It's not like the concepts are very similar, beyond the reference to the painting.

haha, like the idea here.
I took your advice on my trick or treat see what you think when you have a min

Very nice drawing and colours - perhaps make the car look a bit more animated though, perhaps smashing some cones out of the way and lifting off the ground slightly.

Tombie - Wow, I never thought of it as a driving test, but more of a test drive from a car dealership or something. I think I kind of like your concept better... hmm..

This is great! I love the allusion to the scream!

I love this! I don't think it matters if there are a lot of designs with the scream guy in them

I wasn't thinking of it being a test specifically, just cones on a road for roadworks, or something. Either way, it'd give an impression that the car's out of control and heading somewhere it's not meant to.

he's like, o noez

i like alot - hope it gets printed... and i hate to say it but the natural color fits best even tho i think there is alot of natural colors already on threadless.. cheers
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Yeah, I was thinking more of sticking to my original idea, it requires more imagination, which is good, so it can be interpreted many ways.

Thanks for your comments everyone! I'll see what I can do.

I think I'm going to turn this in for scoring.. I can't think of any ways to improve this...

Are there any last comments?

The scream face has been used before but that doesn't make it off limits. Your useage is totally different than the one on threadless. I seriously doubt that they'll reject it. All in all though do you really need the scream face? The funny part is that the crash test dummy is driving the car. You could put any anxious passenger in the car and not loose a thing. I hate the bridge and road, they're distracting. Add a couple of road cones flying in the air (Tombie's suggestion) and I think you've got a winner.

haha, i really like this

It's a decent idea. I think the car could use a few highlights on it and some shadow below it to make it satnd out a bit.

this is funny, but the illustration needs to be better rendered

I took some suggestions on making the illustration more interesting and detailed... here it is!
I was also thinking having a traffic light (on yellow) on the back of the shirt. Your suggestions/comments?

BUMP

Very cool! I'd buy it. but make the traffic light at the bottom right on the back. 8D

bump

Munch would be so proud.

What is that supposed to mean?

bump

Fun design, but please no more Munch or The Scream!!

Very cool. I like the detail, and the idea of a traffic light on the back.


(I'm looking for some help/critique on one of my subs too...
http://www.threadless.com/critique/11894/Dangers_in_the_Field
I'd appreciate your opinion. :) If you have the time.)

munch?

I laughed as much as I saw this. I love that SO SO SO much. I think it's fine, submit it!

i want to see more line quality, like thicks and thins

it seems like you don't know who Munch is. maybe wikipedia could enlighten you: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Edvard_Munch

OOHH okay. I thought everyone was talking about Robert Munch. :/

when I made this design I didn't do much research on it.

Munch would be so proud.
I'm actually laughing out loud right now.

this will probably be my last edit before I submit.
any comments?

YESH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WINNER!!!!!!!!

bump

are there any last comments before I submit this?

5$

id say go for it.
maybe make the cat a different color and its shadow is a bit weird but great none the less.

critique mine?
www.threadless.com/critique/15137/Mikey_and_the_Monster

cats shadow is a bit oddly shaped, but good concept

I'd buy it!!!

i like the red one