Inspired by the prisoner. Advice as to arrangement of figures and placement appreciated. Also, whether you think stick with black and white or go coloured. And if you think it\'s just a dumb idea, please say. Thanks chaps!

any comments?

I like it a lot.

I loved the prisoner

but...

maybe you should create a number 5 and replace that 6 with it.
The Prisoner was, after all, Number Six.

Ooh, gosh, my geek is showing, I need to stop. But really. To make it more Prisoner-esque number 6 shouldn't be standing there while someone else steals his line.

Do you think the little 'n' could be an 's' ???
Then he could be more representitive of number 's'ix on the show.

One other thing, if it is easy to do, maybe on another color and an idea of placement and size. Try a couple of experiments and put them in your next version...one smaller in the chest area, another large across the whole front of the shirt, etc. Get kooky with it and see what you come across.

p.s. I like the subtle '42' that is created...that alone boosts this to a 5 for me! (pending other above mentioned changes)

Thanks for all the help!

yep, I did think that having number six on there might be a bit odd (though I don't want the shirt to be too prisoner-cliquey), so i'll try it with a 5.

I'll see about changing the letter- I went for n not for any prisoner reference but because it is used as a number in equations and stuff- also, it couldn't be mistaken for any other number...i'll see what I do about that...look out for another version soon

Oh someone revoked their don't submit...and I haven't even done anything to it...

Best TV show. I agree that the 6 should be replaced. Also, could you add an old-style bicycle?

I was thinking about having a penny farthing bike in there- I'm just not sure how i'd get a number riding it- I'll see what I can do

I think 9 or 7 could probably ride the bike. Also, even if you don't want to to be too "Prisoner-ish," you could use some reds and yellows on the numbers instead of black and white.


Please critique me!

Yeah six seems a little fat! Maybe one of those skinny 5s or a 1! I think making the n stand out a bit with another colour to it might be cool!
other than that its pretty rad.....
maybe a trapped number inside the bit blobby 0!

hi, i like it alot! i feel keeping the numbers black and white with the checker and strip design give your prisoner more character to it, they display an old school feel and retro look. Afterall they are prisoner, so black and white rawks! I love it tat way!

Hw abt adding more character to the different faces? for example you can give mustache to some, ear rings, while different expression to them? (just a suggestion)

Keep it up, nice! cheers

Hey thanks for the suggestions guys- I'm working on something else at the moment, but I will return to this soon and see if I can work in some of those ideas

Well, I've never seen the show you guys are talking about, but I love this just because it gets on my nerves when people say "to the nth degree." As for colors, maybe incorporate the shirt color into the numbers?

sweetness.

oh my god I'd completely forgotten this existed. Actually, I kinda like it

I like your style! It's really different. :D

Can you critique mine if you have time?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/17367/Fly_to_the_sky

I think number 4 is a stroke of genius. looks like he's breakdancing. how bout throwing in some more black and white accesories like the umbrella? some ball and chains and maybe some weights. here's my latest ver: http://www.threadless.com/critique/18760/There_s_something_living_under_my_potato

I'd be interested in seeing the placement. I like the stark black and white.

I'd appreciate a critique:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/18824/multinational

Funky i like it, how about making the text much clearer and how it would look on a shirt ?

Crit mine;

Red Cell Love
Stary
Man of Mind
Pharaoh

Has this been subbed? I've done a second version on the chess club check it out