I couldn\'t decide what color I like best, comments are welcome.

Also...is center placement ideal?

I think the arrows should go in the opposite direction, so the seawater evporates into the clouds which rain on the farm, cos right now, it looks like the waves are washing over the farm which is bad.

don't change the arrows, just put the water on the left and the land on the right

I think it's fine, but should be smaller on the shirt.

It's an interesting idea, but I don't think it works very well on a tee. There are a lot of rough edges on the shapes that stick out quite a bit on something so simple, and I don't think that the black outline is a good solution to separating the images from the tee. Also, if you didn'y take the photographs you used in the arrows you're going to run into licensing issues.

Looking at these more...I would say my choice is between v1 and v3



V3 is growing on me more and more...

help me out with feedback!

V1 and V3 are both fine.



V2 = no

I think the concept is interesting, but the execution seems amateur. I think I would like it better if it were drawings or illustrations rather than photographs.

and more likely photographs taken from google, are they from google?

omg against bounds stop naggin at everyone about they pics, were not stealing them! I agree with winkypants [lolz], like v3 better

to kippy: eh? im just pointing out something that i think, and nagging? if you want just nice criticism ask your parents, this a forum open for opinions you know, and some people have actually thanked me for my advice so...

so..............................?

fill in the blank. damn, just saw your age =x

ha ha ha! x] yeah I know it's for opinions, but they should also be constructive, that what I meant. Not just a comment about how you don't like it, maybe something they could do to improve it. Sorry lovemyshirts for having an arguement on your critique. I think this design should be improved a lot more, it needs to be stylised a LOT. Maybe you could use a drawing and brighten it up, it think the arrows could do without an outline, or a less definate one.

thanks for all the critiques!

I will try to work on actually illustrating this, I think it WOULD look better that way.

this is a logo I designed a few years ago, it moves me what can I say?

I'll work on it and incorporate all the feedback I can!

a logo for what?



Was it printed?

A school project. The subject was "the pillars of good character" for a management class. This was the logo for one of my pillars.

I printed it for school, that was it...that is why I wanted to submit it here, I liked it so much I wanted to share!

i really love v3 but isnt there way to many colours?

there is I think...

I am working on a new version now...

working on the color problem.

This is ver 3



I like it best, but I am still working on redoing the whole thign by hand and then reimporting it into photoshop before submitting.



Looking for constructive feedback please!

It looks best on white as well btw =]

tee hee



thanks!

Sorry that the little multi colored shirts still have the V2 image on them...oops!



I think it looks really great, I would love to hear what people think of it.