Another collaboration with Matt Logan. He and I have more to come...but this one looked best in one color with multiple shades. I chose sepia tones, and felt it looked best on creme or light blue.

nice! =)

best on creme :)

i like side!

nice work, submit.

Thanks. I think it came together nicely. Side and creme are my personal favorites.

very creative

i like it better on blue - to many shirts here with the creme or natual color

For those of you who say it needs work, tell me what you would suggest! I can't read minds! That's why it is in critique first.

Anyone???? Something constructive?

ok, to be honest, it looks great, I love the line work and shading. However, it looks like it could be done in two colors tops, with halftones or cross-hatch versions of the same color. This version with little color suits my tastes actually, but if you want a bigger score, you could color the whole thing with 6 other colors (assuming you reduce this to 1-2 colors) to make it more dramatic.

I would be horribly sad if you added a bunch of color to this. I actually think it's great and needs nothing. I don't know why anyone would think it needs more work. That's just me I guess.