A Moonster.. Moon Monster.. it could tear this very world apart.

I\'m looking for critique on color selection, any ideas? I like that you have to look at it to see it, I think it makes it a stronger piece but perhaps I\'m wrong.

i very much like the fists down the bottom, with the cracks in the rock spreading out from them. not so keen on the top half. though could be fabulous with a bit more work :)
oh and colours are great. the black and white is very dramatic, the white looks almost like lightning :)

Thanks! Any suggestions to strengthen the top half?

I'm thinking give him a head, or atleast some slits for eyes(perhaps red/dark red for the eyes), but overall I think it is great, I would definitely buy this tee.

Thanks! I avoided adding a head because I figured he's made of moon rock.. straight from the depths, ya know?

angry eyes would be a good addition, but make them subtle. the illustration is nice as it is.

i like this. submit

Thanks! Anyone have any critiques on this? Looking for some feedback, thanks!

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Any feedback out there? :D

eyes definitely, i was looking for 'em. as for the first, i think it's hitting the ground at a pretty weird position. it's not the usual way people fist the ground.


help me with mine,
http://www.threadless.com/critique/11622/Lucky_Clover

Actually, it's prying the ground open...

it looks like they're punching the ground

it looks like they're punching the ground

http://www.threadless.com/critique/11622/Lucky_Clover

i like it but i'm thinking a face would be a welcomed addition. without some sort of expression i don't see this design working.

I would like to see some shading/ other colors for more depth. If not that then I agree with everyone else about adding eyes, face or similar to make it a bit clearer what is happening.

I like it, but the building seems out of place to me. Maybe if it blended in more/ was more abstract.

Drawn to Genius

(Disregard the building comment, I miscopied from another post.)

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I've gotten a bunch of mixed comments on this piece, but am looking for a few more.. :D