I know that isn't a real shirt color, but that can come later. Its an update of this:

old version

anything to do with ninja turtles is fine in my book

!! love! this is clever

greaT!

duuuuudeee...

was totally raised with this cartoon. $5

Okay. I'm going to add a picture of april o'neil. And does that piece of pizza clinging to the toe look weird?

nice illustration, maybe add some yellow highlights to the pizza on his toe.

great update. Lookoing forward to seeing V2

Cheese on the toe looks fine.

haha. I have a great idea- I'm putting a photo of april o'neil with a different turtle's arm around her(other half of photo ripped off) on the floor of this.

However, I'm afraid if I do more I'll take away from the original idea of it just being a fat ninja turtle. So I dunno, we'll see how it looks.

awesome. some of the bottles should be knocked over or maybe even broken. great work so far.

Since Mike was the 'party dude' you should add more party things. OH! Like an inflatable sheep!

wowza

made some minor changes and stuff. This still isn't final and I really need to correct the colors.

i like the additions and tweaks but the new colors is a HUGE NO!

keep the original colors and add the posters.

I agree with the two people above me... I'd buy it!

what about a brick facade in the background? Hm.

Definately like the first color scheme better.

I think this will be the final version. I'm really frustrated with the colors, but this was the best I could do. Top one is 4 color bottom is 5 color.

actually... I just looked back up to the first version, and maybe I'll do the coloring the way I did it there- use the highlight as the shirt color and use the bottom color scheme. It looks bad the other way around.

Love, love the concept, and I actually love the first version, but I have to say that the bg in your latest version is pretty awesome too.. I'm torn..

And nevermind, I took a second look, and just hope that the there isnt a design difference between guys and girls shirts, cause I want the guy's shirt.. =(

$5

5-colour one rocks.

BlameTheSuburbs on Mar 09 '07
actually... I just looked back up to the first version, and maybe I'll do the coloring the way I did it there- use the highlight as the shirt color and use the bottom color scheme. It looks bad the other way around.

are you gonna post up anther version so we can see it?

or do i just not understand what you are saying?

oh man.. love the concept. i wish you could have made mikey a bit more "let go." maybe he could have put on a few pounds?

bottom left of v3 looks great. nice job!

Bottom left V3 for me too.

There's something a little strange going on with the perspective. The bottles and boxes and the wall behind him and to the left look pretty far away, but on the right they all look significantly closer.

Version one is the best I think....

to green for me I think!

the first version was the best. Great concept!

Changed my mind. the first version is more simple. Go with that one.

Go with original colors and brick background.

the perspective for the boxes was copied straight from a 3d-modeling program... I'm too lazy to do it myself. I added the bottles and the turtle though. What exactly makes it weird?

I am SO BAD at working with colors. I spent like 3 hours trying to get this to look right and never could. I don't know how the profiles/color management stuff works at all, which just confuses things. Oh well.

I think this will get the general point across.

add tears

i like this one and v1 the best, stay way from the darker colors, but i like the brick behind him

It seems as though you have put alot of time and effort into this. This has probably been one of the most extensive uses of the new critique tool that I have ever seen, and the version above seems very good. The only thing that is bothering me right now is that he seems to be more ripped than "let go." Otherwise, I like what you have done with this.

eh... i pushed it into the running. I am sick of working on it. I have all sorts of other cooler stuff to work on in the future.

Dude submit it. Insta 5 from me. TMNT is ALWAYS good.

LOVE IT!

I love it. I like it better without the bricks but the drawing is awesome. I can't wait to see it in the running.

submit this one def.

ooh. declined for copywrite. I suppose that makes sense. Anyone know of an possible way around this?

Try making mikey look changed some how. It seems that the driving force behind any possible copyright issue would be that the design is sort of leaning on the side of just the normal mikey being surrounded by a bunch of pizza boxes.

Still sucks that it got turned down. How did it get in originally?