larger linear

i like B/W ... do you?

btw, this is a remake of my old and hastily subbed design "future connections"

"World's Fair" looks a little awkward.. kind looks like it says World Stair... perhaps making it read "World Fair"

other than that very nice!!!!

thanks and i agree. it needs to be world's though, ill just have to move fair abit to the right.

dont forget to look at v1 for a bigger view of the lineart

newest version. comments?

It's totally awesome. The only thing that doesn't sit right is the "History: From the Patriot Act to Eurocorp." Though most voters wouldn't take issue with that line, it's a little heavy-handed. Either way, really cool concept and design, and great use of a single ink.

eurocrop is the an evil power in the syndicate wars series. its kick ass. and thanks, btw!

besides, the patriot act is what it is and the design is not commenting wether its bad or good

without gradient/halftones, better?

I still think including that particular tag-line interjects a certain point of contention in an otherwise purely fun, awesome design. Don't get me wrong, I'll still 5 it, personally, but (and this may just be me playing safe-guy), it may be better to alter than throwing out a relatively controversial topic for people to battle over. Regarding the gradients/halftones, I think it looks marginally better without, just because the excellent centerpiece remains more focused.

better presentation of halftone/gradient version

i agree that it is a risk taken by my but still, im the designer and this i how i intended it.

however, i will, when i submit, state that i could change it to "from the bio-chip to..." if its totally unacceptable but to me, being a european, that is absurd and quite nazi-ish =)

Right on ^^
The halftones (or lake thereof) look equally acceptable. It wouldn't affect my score, positively or negatively.
Either way, cool concept, cool design. Good luck man.

I fear your high-IQ-type of design won´t be welcomed properly by the mere mortals but I dig it. And that´s all that matters.

So good I want to weep. V4 by a whisker. Not so immediately evident that it's a futuristic poster as the original design, so I worry that a some people will score without looking @ it properly but it presses all my buttons. Good job man ( as usual).

aw darn it! i submitted V5 just now. i just thought that the gradient tied the design together better.

sorry. oh well...

There really wasn't much between them. Either will do you proud. :)

I hate to be a pain, but did you catch that you wrote "Partiot?"

ha! no =( easy to fix though