white and 3 different hues of pink

on pink shirt



as always comments/suggestions are always welcomed

^^

just fixed up a bit their bodies so its not this big swooshy blob

Maybe have them actually drinking the drink? That'd seem more natural.

Yeah, I thought the same thing, put the straws in the mouths, other than that I like it, I like the colors too. Very pretty.

yeah, straws in the mouths. And find some better silhouettes.

yay comments

:D

thanks ill go work on it

it seems way too pink for my tastes

the Gay Pride lions sub did this waaaaayy better. . . if I were you I would look for a new concept

make the silhouettes a little less similar. it's almost like a pair of twins dating.

are those two guys dating?

CHUG CHUG CHUG. No, I think the thing that throws my eye off with the silhouettes is the lack of neck. That, or how their necks aren't very distinguished. Oh and straws in mouth is great.

not sure i like the long hair...but people wanted more subtlety...

added a couple points in the vector to create a neck

put the straws in the mouth (so much easier just submitting the design than the actual file of the image, I can just create a block to place over it than try to figure out how to get the layers ordered correctly and the colors separated :D)



there's actually 4 hues of pink, forgot to count the one in the straws

any tips on hair?

if you take the silhouettes of two guys i think the head/hair looks pretty much the same as long as one doesnt have like a crazy mohawk or something

(tried that btw, didnt think the mohawk was quite right either)

maybe you make the girl with a plait?

the bodys are not realistic enough or you make them less realistic?

i like the idea!! how about a darker red for the bodys- more contrasts??

sorry for my english :-/

fix the girl, she kind of looks more manly than the man.

i think her chin is too pointy, and somethings up with her shoulder and torso area.. but I like the idea, this would make a cute shirt.

well its "be bent"

therefore not straight, meaning its suppose to be 2 guys dating

but then theres people who wanted subtlety so i gave one of the guys long hair

but now that just seems to have lost the meaning of the design...



thanks for comments

ill go work on it

I agree with you, koager. (:

I liked the shorter hair better, but you can do it subtley if you make it almost long, yet moreso short. To me, the hands look a tad too small, though.

I prefer the shorter hair, it's easy to mistake him for a girl as shown by two of the comments so far. I didn't even realize it was two guys until I looked at the previous versions.



That being said:

GRAGHAGHAH cut off.



I love it other than what I said. I'm gay, whch makes me like it even more, lol.

let's see...

new hair

changed the background color to the actual shirt color (before I had it lighter so you can see the placement mannequins, but now I just added a white stroke around the shirts)

then I made a dock with a couple on it and a swan boat

more ripples under it

therefore I had to change my 2nd detail



comments/suggestions are always welcomed and preferred

hmm. most people wont like it because of the controversial subject.



As for the design... i like the simplicity of the people compared to the detail in the glass. Good work. The placement would need to be huge to see that detail though.



Would you mind helping me out with my critique?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/11081/Good_Vibes

That would be awesome!

the glass seems too big for the guys drinking from it. other than that it's fine.

it really really really really REALLY helps if those who voted "needs work" and "don't submit" leave a comment on why

:/