Wouldn\'t everyone love a nice, energy-efficient whale to ride around in? Runs solely on plankton, which is much cheaper than gas, I assure you.

hehe this is funky!

could ditch some of the clouds though i think....

Thank you! Do you think no clouds, fewer clouds, less obvious clouds...

The sky's the limit, right?

Like it! 3 Clouds?

i'd say if you want to get rid of the clouds only get rid of one or two, they are mighty cute.

Maybe lose the ones near the line of the water... since it's so thin and dotted, you can miss it and think the cute lil whale is flying.

Im wondering if maybe the waterine should have a different outline from the clouds.. not dotted, maybe solid or dashed or just something else.

cute design btw

We all live in a whale submarine!
A whale submarine!
A whale submarine!
We all live in a whale submarine!
A whale submarine!
A whale submarine!

I love how the waves and clouds are dotted lines.

Man, I wish I lived in a whale submarine.

I moved the clouds up a bit away from the water and gave the water a thicker, but still dotted, line. Thoughts?

You're going to hate me but I liked the more subtle dotted line better. I DO like the placement of the clouds 10x more on this one though.

PS - your whale is so fricken adorable. It makes me want to hug one right now.

V1 is better, and there's something wrong with the tail, it doesnt match the rest of the illy

This makes me wonder what it would look like with no line at all for the water.. I know he would then be floating in the sky.. but that would be cute too.. : )

I agree, bad idea on my part for the solid water line, I just felt like it should be set apart from the clouds.

I liked the dotted lines. Have you tried outlining the whale in dotted lines? I'm curious to see what that would look like.

or just a change on colour for the water line. and maybe look at doing the same for all your outlines :)

Oooh the whale in dotted lines might be interesting....

Your wish is my command, and so I present you with the Great Dotted Whale.

Any comments on the latest version before I submit it?

lets see it on a shirt for placement..

Do you mean that you want to see a bigger version than the little thumb in the corner? I was afraid that if I just showed it on the shirt, you wouldn't be able to see the detail so well.

Im sorry, I didnt even see the shirt there.. maybe on a model would help.. but I guess not necessary.

No problem. I have a knack for forgetting important details like that, so I always appreciate any looking out.

This one's been pushed into the running.

Any more comments are always appreciated. Thanks for all your help, everyone!