very cute.. I think maybe just shade those glasses.

nice style.



problem: this theme is tired, and to be quite honest, you haven't done anything spectacular to make it stand out.



it's cute, though.

looks good.



maybe have it like



OO

OO



instead of



OOOO



so the graphic can be bigger.

it's cute :)



or like, put them in separate boxes but in



O O

O O



style.

maybe have it like



OO

OO





Absolutely do this.

its great :D

no boxes. but the



XX

XX layout would be cool

cute!!! maybe u should draw more!!! fill full on tshirt!!

ok I changed the format of the graphic from your suggestions :] (thanks by the way guys!)

what do you guys reckon now?

I liked it better the other way, personally.. and I still say do something about that first monkeys glasses..

hmm...i was thinking that, [about the glasses] but im not sure whether it'll fit in with the others, as in their objects aren't coloured in

I like it better the other way as well. I am not into all this big huge t-shirt designs, but maybe that's just me.



I think you should also replace the glasses - and the clothespin is kinda looking like an engagement ring at the moment.

ok trail with the glasses :]

I think it works better that way.. blind.. dark glasses, they go hand in hand.

ahah yeah i agree it does look better this way :]

definitely better

HAHAHAHA!!!

maaaaaaaan!! this is tooooo cool! those monkeys are stylin!

this cracks me up! submit,$5,print,buy!

your style is cute, but i'm not sure that the four elements have much presence on the tee. can you do something with the placement?

yeah im still wondering whether to put it



OOOO



or



OO

OO [if its in this style the graphics stand out and are a bit more clearer..]



or maybe even..



OO

OO



thoughts..?

I mean the third option being..



OO

I mean the third option being..



OO

**OO



[ignore the **]

Yeah, placement seems abit odd. Maybe 4 in a row?

agreed with emilykwa, and don't they need mouths?

Love it!

tried it with another style..and another format.



shaded it in with pencil this time :]



thoughts?

I most defiantly would buy this! :)

I personally like vs. 3 better.. submit that one..

hmm..but which format is better?



OO

OO



or..



O

O

O

O

I'm not sure how one really indicates it in a jpeg, but now you can use the foil or shimmery inks that threadless has (like the gold foil trim on "Parable Paranoia") but you could certainly use a silver foil... which would look great as headphones, duct tape and aviators. I suppose a clothespin could be metal too, yeah?



Great idea by the way :)

o wow! what a great idea!



it'll certainly give the design something to bring it out..



cheers for the suggestion! :]

yeah i agree. the shading would look better in metallic.



great concept:)

I like the:

O O

O O

now that I look at it, but I still like the shading alot.

i think its better with the one color

i liked it straight across.. lol..

def. like the

00

00

format. and i def. think you should go with the foil inks!!! would be spiffy!

haha ok another trail..

The newest one but I like the placement of 4 better

Hmm I like both v5 anf v4 placements...



I wonder if silver foil would work better than the metallic.

whats the difference between metallic and foil?



haha sorry for the noob question..

I like vesion 4.

I like the idea, but I think it'd be hilarious if you made the last monkey gagging from the stench or something. Calvin&Hobbes-esque gag is what came immediately to mind.



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very nice!!!! I think I like the



O

O

O

O

placement... best!!

but the

OO

OO

is good to0.

Metallic and Glitter ink has sparkles, while foil has a mirror like finish.



It also comes in many colors. Check out the specialty printing pdf.

why smell no evil but not taste no evil?

Got to say, I still like v3's colouring better.

i like vs. 3 color better too

This is adorable! I like the placement for v4 a lot more. I'd totally buy it if it gets printed.

hmm...ok what do you guys think would be the better one..



1- V4 placement with bronze coloured foil



or



2- V5 placement using bronze foil



..?

Personally to cutesy for me to wear but I do like the addition of 'smell'

nice one.

love this, think it's getting overworked was fine at the start.

v3 is best

this looks good, maybe just a little higher on shirt.

the artwork's great. feels like retro evil monkies with the aviators and oversized headphones.



i like the setting in v4. i think subconsciously having monkeys lined up in some way. it helps with the presentation of the new monkey when you follow it like that. also, have you tried spacing "smell" away from the other 3 - a la the blacksheep? just a thought.



the metallic ink works :). good job. looking forward to seeing this printed!

i like v4 a bit more, both are good anyway, good luck ;D