this font is much better. i think it might be cool to write out some lyrics instead of a statement. just a thought...

there is a song called I'll Write the Song, You Sing For Me by Irving... better?

I noticed that too. Maybe make it a tad more original? I know this will be hard, seeing that most of the things you can have on the shirt will be song titles... D:

ummm i don't know exactly what to say. i like the basic concept, but the design just still seems bland i guess. if you really drew this thing out with a detailed illustration i think it'd be great, but i don't see it as the type of concept that will do well with a simple design. i may be dead wrong though, that's just my .02

Typeface=NO! Find a better one. It looks very western (as in cowboys) and your guitar is very not (as in electric fender action). I understand wanting it to look somewhat scrawly and hand-done, but you could find a better one.

still a work in progress folks.. changed my text but I'm still working on changing the font or guitar to something more cowboy-ish..stay tuned for a new version!

I like the concept but I think this interpretation is too simple. I dont know how good you are at drawing or manip'ing photos but if you took an image of a dude doing a sweet guitar solo and changed the end of the guitar to a pencil writing the words (and maybe some music notes or sheet music lines) and found a better font than this would totally fly.

For the image i reccomend something like this:





and for the font I'd check out the "hand written" category at Abstractfonts.com

I meant

http://content.ytmnd.com/content/0/7/d/07de76675b4e0f78aac50288a84f8e5a.jpg



Jimmi Hendrix

OR! even if you just used the just a manip'ed guitar without a dude playing it.

different guitar.. but I like the idea of including a cowboy/someone playing the guitar.. the suggestions are great, i value your opinons.

i think its time that this tee gets put on the back burner.. my creative juices are shot.. Thanksgiving break ends in a few days anyway.

This is very cute! I'd like to see it look more hand-written, though. The letters are too perfectly aligned to have been written by a pencil. I also think it might benefit from some more colors.

Great concept. I honestly prefer the "write me a song" slogan, though.