New critique, how\'s it looking?

I LOVE IT. You could make the inside of the bubble look nicer though. The two characters inside are really close to the edge of the bubble.

new one, let me have it!

ahaha i like it nice work man!

this is genius! submit!

:p

YAY!

hehe thanks guys =)



anyone think it needs any changes?

This is awesome! Seriously, submit! (:

thanks dood. anyone think the Ghostbuster guy looks crappy? or teh ghost in the bubble?

Hey.



Love the idea kick ass! just one thing the ghost busters guy maybe needs hair? i dono ther is somthing dodgy about him...

$5 submit it man.

yeah I think maybe some hair but otherwise I think this is seriously one of the best ideas on Threadless I have seen in some time. PLEASE SUBMIT THIS

thanks guys, i'll throw some hair on him then.

yeah just the little guy needs work. his head is just a circle.

thanks =)



glad you caught that opifan, it originally was only going to be the campfire twist, but then the ghostbusters came to mind and it was just too perfect.

Use faux suede ink for all the colored areas and High-Density ink for the lines and this would totally fly. Very funny too.

http://www.threadless.com/templates/specialty.pdf

hey thanks, i'll add that option in.

new one. does the guy still look dodgey? ...i suck at drawing people unfortunately.

shameless bump.

i like it. too bad halloween's over

damn it woman! don't be givin no loch ness monster no tree fiddy. start out with a buck o' five or sometin!



ehh? am i right?

ROFL mullet 4 the win!!! nice work man sub!

Good submit it already.

hehe thanks guys. unfortunately my perfectionism won't let me submit just yet...the guy's look haunts me. get it? haunts? sorry for that.

maybe give the guy shoes and a propper smile or a mouth open or somthing other than the happy expression, and bring his mullet around abitmore to the left covering more of his face.

does anyone think the characters in the speech bubble need shadows?

JUST SUBMIT TO THE FORCE BABY

no shadows, thoughts don't need to be in 3D.. submit! this is a 5!

GB guy definitely needs some boots. Also I think the edgy look really brings home that it's a story, because the ghosts and campfire are very fluid while the GB guy and the trapped ghost are very edgy.

ty skunk. posting the next one in a few minutes here...with boots.

okay you're all probably sick of looking at this by now so this is it. i'm going to sub it tommorow morning unless anyone can come up with a good reason not to. small changes to the guy and a bit of re-sizing. thanks everyone for all the comments, i really appreciate the help.

i like the one with the design on the chest, this shirt is an awsome idea. Best of luck!

Keep it on the chest. The bottom looks awkward...

I agree. Cool idea. fix the placement.

hey,

check my next version please. Need feed back. Should I submit?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/30599/Extinct